r00tH4cK3r46139

KAT Elite

anti drama freestyle, behold the lyrical genious

0 views    posted 06 Aug 2012, 02:04    
I am about to let go of the feelings i hide deep inside
the truths i try not to realize, rules that i abide
by, and the truth of truths always leads to a lie
to a lie that makes me want to say goodbye

a fluctuation in the force, compounded by remorse
true feelings always hurt and true hurt leads to back to the source
the source of which, tells you things and good or bad things it will bring
sometimes true love is not true love and is only a fling

they say life is what you make it, take it back, nah fuck it ill take it
up on stage, nervous as hell so ill just picture everyone naked
but there is no one, feeling like im on the other end of a gun
tie to me a chair, cut off all my hair, sit me in a room with a nun
ill confess my sins, which chagrin, go back to where it all begins
a fucked up childhood with misery that seemed like it would never end
but im stronger than all of that, fuck two faced people you can have them back
been through hell and back but this big boy is alive and intact
so fuck what you say and the drama you bring
i am above everything
a bigger man at heart and bigger man in size
a real man in everyones eyes
so take back all your drama filled words
go into the garden and sing it to the birds
let them shit on all you've heard
and give you the finger as you burn....


fuck this shit, drooling out of my mouth as i spit, no remorse
this lyrical venom rotting all like bacterium on top of a rotting corpse
burn it all, light the flame
you dumb motherfuckers are the bane
the bane of my existence and the reason for all of this pain
but thats okay, thats alright, i still sleep good at night
when the bed bugs bite and i contemplate my plight, ill rise above everyday and night
i might be a sight for sore eyes
but ill put an end to all these lies
and all this hurt deep inside, ill carry with me but i wont die
i am a terminator, but one of truth and light
my future is bright and i will live on as you struggle to sleep well through the night
my days of feeling sorry for you motherfuckers is gone
and with it goes the days that i am played and used just like a pawn
true independence is won by resistant, a rebel to your cause and all it delivers
my words go down hard like a liquor and it burns to your livers
as you shiver with fear i walk out with my head held high
no more guilt, no more pain, with eagerness in my heart i wave goodbye

Top Comments

3
SirSeedsAlot88.81K • 06 Aug 2012, 02:14
if you want to be a chaotic tortured artist you;re on the right path! i think you just need to get laid though hee hee
2
r00tH4cK3r46.14K • 06 Aug 2012, 02:21
i actually did recently, and it was awesome :P
2
RiverCoyote39.83K • 06 Aug 2012, 03:38
Hmmm...I think you are changing for the better. That's a good thing and I'm glad to see it!

All Comments

0
Taunchi2989 • 08 August 2012, 12:47 Show comment
I wasn't stealing thunder. I was offering some constructive criticism in a form he might better enjoy.. Rather than giving it a TLDR. I didn't bash either and I figured a comment in the form of a rhyme would suite, considering. Removing my comment was whack to say the least.
0
FondleXCorpse912 • 06 August 2012, 04:44 Show comment
pm me if you ever lay it down with a beat and upload it, and check out Aesop rock, the mans got a great flow and lyrics that'll blow ur mind
the tracks Daylight and Nightlight two opposite songs , its crazy
0
FondleXCorpse912 • 06 August 2012, 04:34 Show comment
not bad, better with a beat i imagine...but
acouple lines im not really feeling mainly the tie me to a chair and cut off all my hair.... who would do that ? it makes no sense in this.. seems like your rhyming without meaning
and the line - true independence is won by resistant, a rebel to your cause and all it delivers -
maybe won by THE resistant - or - won by resistance - or - won by resisting -
Im not not not trying to be a dick, just trying to help
I DO realize that while typing this out you might have missed words by accident
i still sleep good at night
when the bed bugs bite and i contemplate my plight, ill rise above everyday and night
i might be a sight for sore eyes
but ill put an end to all these lies
and all this hurt deep inside, ill carry with me but i wont die
I like that one
much better than anything lil wayne can write
he rhymes with no meaning makes up words just to rhyme - and its sad that he sets the bar for other artists in the industry
leaving Aesop rock to fall by the wayside
2
RiverCoyote39.83K • 06 August 2012, 03:38 Show comment
Hmmm...I think you are changing for the better. That's a good thing and I'm glad to see it!
1
r00tH4cK3r46.14K • 06 August 2012, 03:45 Show comment
:) thanks
3
SirSeedsAlot88.81K • 06 August 2012, 02:14 Show comment
if you want to be a chaotic tortured artist you;re on the right path! i think you just need to get laid though hee hee
2
r00tH4cK3r46.14K • 06 August 2012, 02:21 Show comment
i actually did recently, and it was awesome :P
1
SirSeedsAlot88.81K • 06 August 2012, 02:55 Show comment
yay the root scored!!!
0
r00tH4cK3r46.14K • 06 August 2012, 03:45 Show comment
it was a high score to
Report a bug