hunniboo11101

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Aloha

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A bitter sweet goodbye it was
You will always have my heart, my soul and my body
With each tear that falls is another minute in your arms knowing this is good bye.
My heart sinks lower and lower into sadness
Don't stop holding me
Don't stop brushing my hair to the side
Don't stop kissing me
My body shakes with each thought of you leaving
Wishing circumstances were different
Wishing you could stay
In another life
In another time
In another universe we'll meet again

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Cariad10.08K • 06 Apr 2012, 07:40
That's so sad, and raw and honest.. I hope this helps a little..
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SirSeedsAlot89.16K • 06 April 2012, 17:50 Show comment
how sad :(
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Stormarekilla28.23K • 06 April 2012, 13:28 Show comment
Aloha means Goodbye just as much as it means Hello.
One day you both shall meet again.
Wonderful Poetry hunniboo. love to hear more of what you got.
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hunniboo11.1K • 06 April 2012, 18:18 Show comment
all my poetry is from my heart. i'll try to find others i've wrote and post it.
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MOST_WASTED6252 • 06 April 2012, 09:57 Show comment
i hope you are ok
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MOST_WASTED6252 • 06 April 2012, 11:36 Show comment
thinking of the goodtimes u had would always turn a frown dowside up
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MOST_WASTED6252 • 06 April 2012, 19:00 Show comment
ah so it was poetry. and here i thought your plant died or something lol phew. got me believin so that means its good poetry biggrin
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hunniboo11.1K • 06 April 2012, 20:58 Show comment
well, it is based on real events, that's why it's so sad :(
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MOST_WASTED6252 • 07 April 2012, 04:02 Show comment
well count on me to say the wrong things eh Lol. its a good poem boo. poetry, motorboating, geez woman u make me feel so useless tonguelol
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canny2020227 • 06 April 2012, 08:29 Show comment
Jeez!!... I never realised I meant that much to you, Hunniboo!!lollolloltongue
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SirHatesaLot27.12K • 06 April 2012, 07:57 Show comment
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hunniboo11.1K • 06 April 2012, 18:16 Show comment
that's beautiful man
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Cariad10.08K • 06 April 2012, 07:40 Show comment
That's so sad, and raw and honest.. I hope this helps a little..
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ManyWurlds56.19K • 06 April 2012, 07:18 Show comment
Where's the hula girls and the grass skirts????crycrycry
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Divaville375 • 06 April 2012, 07:05 Show comment
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hunniboo11.1K • 07 April 2012, 03:25 Show comment
i just know :(
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